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Book review — The Farm, by Jessica Mansour-Nahra

Title: The Farm

Author: Jessica Mansour-Nahra

Publisher: Hachette Australia, 2025; RRP $32.99

Review: Rhonda Cotsell, Ballarat Writers Inc. Book Review Group

The author

Jessica Mansour-Nahra has worked previously as a communications consultant and writer in various locations around the world and holds degrees in History and Law from the University of Queensland. The Farm is her first novel. 

The book

Leila and James have suffered through multiple IVF attempts before a final success ends in the tragedy of a heartbeat lost. Leila must then undergo an operation to make conception again possible after which, to recuperate and improve the chances of conceiving again, they move to his parents’ farm, thinking peace from the city and fresh air will help.

Leila initially finds the house beautiful but slightly oppressive. Described as classically beautiful it  is also unusually unkempt, some of the interior showing contradictory signs of age and wear. There is a rear screen door, which cannot be locked, leading out to an area littered with rubbish and a small, heavily locked shed, the purpose of which is not disclosed.

To offset the isolation there are other farms within view albeit distant whose owners James takes pains to introduce Leila to so she might feel less alone. There is also a nearby small town for non-urgent supplies that they visit and socialise in together and with locals.

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Leila’s body is still recovering from the operation and she is often in pain. Throughout there are frequent references to a cocktail of painkillers that she takes, often washed down with wine. This  concerns the sometimes overly solicitous James. She eats what he considers to be too little but also shares pleasant evenings cooking for and with James.

Her unease and physical condition do not prevent her from exploring the farm and surrounding bushland, taking long walks daily on the advice of her doctor. Her moods and some of her behaviour seem erratic and a little difficult to grasp initially, but there are understandable reasons as the story unfolds. Her and James’s relationship was understandably strained, for example, by their mutual grief, her state of health, the fact they are spending more time together than usual, and their differing relationship with the farm itself and his albeit absent parents to whom he is devoted and  who moved away in order for James and Leila to have privacy.

There is an overhanging unease about the house, James, and his absent parents, but the effect is diluted by awareness of potential exaggeration by the many drugs – to which James – more comfortable in this environment which is his, not hers – objects vigorously. And it is never quite clear – given the story is told through her eyes – whether the general weirdness is drug induced or the result of James pressuring her when she is actually in pain.

Although their isolation is presented in a way both claustrophobic and overwhelming, I enjoyed the details of bushland and open spaces. Apart from bringing a sense of bushland and country into the reading, the depictions of their surroundings in its narrative role as background captures both its muted and slightly otherworldly eeriness and its beauty.

…a serpentine stream banked by sandy clay, disappearing into thick trees. The water is clear and I see shimmering rocks, mottled plants and sticks beneath the surface. The sound is gentle as the water laps against and plops over the rocks

These passages of description are on the surface of it pleasing, creating in the reader’s mind an  environment alive and familiar, not something entirely forbidding despite perhaps the ‘serpentine’ nature of the stream. There are however distinctly unsettling moments in her daily walks. There is, for example, the terribly rank smell from a strange concrete structure – purpose unknown – in the bush, and the brief sighting of what seemed to be a stranger’s face disappearing amongst the trees. During a raging storm a terrified woman screams and claws at a window.

These Gothic elements are set within a cast of ordinary, everyday characters engaged in usual farm work and leisure activities among which the two fill their days. Some small inaccuracies of farm work pulled me out of full immersion from time to time but overall the smells, sounds, sights and activities of a country farm with country neighbours and friends was realistically conveyed.

The locals are drawn with a broad brush, and there is an enjoyable depiction of the characteristics and behaviour of the dog who accompanies and comforts Leila. Leila and James’ relationship, which, despite Leila’s growing paranoia also infecting her trust of James, is also convincing. Their separate suffering and struggles to adapt to what is happening in their lives as both individual and as partner reads as warm and painfully real.

Was Leila bordering on physical and emotional collapse due to her health and the death of her unborn child and the fear or never conceiving another, or, given the constant reference to pills and alcohol, simply the slightly unhinged mind of someone self medicating while struggling to retain emotional equilibrium?

It is through Leila’s eyes that the story unfolds, and the claustrophobic setting and hallucinogenic edge of her response to her situation successfully created a dramatic tension that kept this reader on edge to the end.

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Book review – The Four, by Ellie Keel

Title: The Four

Author: Ellie Keel

Publisher: HQ/Harper Collins, 2024; RRP: $32.99

Ellie Keel lives in London and The Four is her debut novel. Ellie has a background in producing and playwriting and is the founder director of the Women’s Prize for Playwriting which promotes gender equality for writers in the UK and Ireland.

This book is an intensely forthright and compelling read, a story about four teenagers who attend an elite boarding school in England for pre university admission. They are scholarship students, academically bright but subjected to the extreme ramifications of class bias and cruelty. Rose, the narrator, and Marta, her co-scholarship room, both suffered the loss of their mothers, Rose just twelve months earlier. Loyd and Sami also have backgrounds of  disadvantage and are determined to make the opportunity work for them.

The four young people have to quickly adjust to the routines and unspoken rules of an institution that is steeped in tradition, bullying and privilege. They learn who to trust and who to avoid but not until they have been subjected to cruel behaviour.

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Prior to their arrival at High Realms, a young woman died on the school premises in circumstances surrounded in silence. The dead girl’s sister, Genevieve, is a prominent and particularly aggressive senior student leader who holds incredible power within the studentship. Then, Genevieve suffers a serious  accident and is hospitalised after an altercation with Marta and what follows becomes a suspenseful and excruciating story of how the four manage to support Marta’s extreme situation. Marta is missing. They are all at risk in many ways and yet they remain secretively loyal to their friend Marta whose mental health is seriously deteriorating.

The author has a writing style that complements the telling of psychological dilemmas and trauma. She cantilevers her work, allowing the reader to understand the inner thoughts of the characters, especially the narrator Rose.

as my father and I approached High Realms in his cab, along the broad drive lined with stately plane trees, I’d felt as though my imagination was being coloured in, to a vividness and a grandeur that exceeded all my expectations … but as soon as we entered the bustling atrium with its dozens of portraits and towering staircase, my excitement had fallen away … I’d looked up and around; I’d seen the hundreds of students who exuded their confidence and beauty even more than their affluence, and I’d felt tiny …

Ellie Keel has created a powerful novel. She goes to the murkiest of situations and doesn’t try to shield the reader’s sensitivities. There are twists and turns when least expected and the suspense is all engaging. The Four is a dark book leaving the reader pondering on the events and almost dismissing them as too bizarre to be true, except the story doesn’t go away; it has relevance and truth in ways that cause a shiver to the spine.

Reviewed by: Heather Whitford Roche

Ballarat Writers Book Review Group, September 2024

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Book review – Hovering, by Rhett Davis

Author: Rhett Davis

Title: Hovering

Publisher: Hachette; RRP: $32.99

In 2015 Rhett Davis completed an MFA in Creative Writing at the University of British Columbia in Vancouver. Hovering was written as part of a PhD at Deakin University and won the Victorian Premier’s Literary Award for an Unpublished Manuscript in 2020. Rhett currently lives in Geelong, Wadawurrung country. Hovering is an interesting and ambitious first novel.

From a writing perspective Hovering is a progressive work, exploring techniques for story telling in the social media age. It delves into several current societal issues reflecting on the current wave of uncertainty and changing values. It also explores traditional themes of family relationships.

There are three main characters in Hovering: Alice, her sister Lydia and Lydia’s son, George. The relationship between these three characters provides the main framework for the story. A fourth character, the city of Fraser, permeates the story line with its distinct persona and surreal habit of reconfiguring streets and landscapes. This touch of the absurd is an interesting metaphor, perhaps for the uncertainty in life. A clever example of showing rather than telling?

Within the story, Davis suggests the reconfiguring nature of the cityscape is a manifestation of guilt. Fraser does not belong in this landscape; it is an infringement on indigenous relationships with country, the natural order of things.

The urban upheavals of Fraser are also a useful backdrop to the stresses within the relationship between the two sisters, though the absurdity of a reconfiguring city may be challenging for some readers.

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At the heart of this story is the family/sibling relationships, tension between the sister who left home to seek her destiny and the sister who remained at home, local versus worldly views.  Alice the artist with a loathing of small town and small-minded thinking, juxtaposed with her analytical sister who has stayed behind, got a job. had a child and who analyses data in search of subtle consumer behavioural insights.

The reader is also treated to an exploration of an artist’s role in reflecting societal values.

Certainly, Davis is not the first author to spend time telling their readers what is wrong with society and yet not offer a lot in the way of remedies. However, in the final stages of the story Davis does offer a little remedial wisdom, and – spoiler alert – it has a lot to do with honest acknowledgment of one’s past mistakes and shortcomings along with a willingness to be better in the future.

Davis ticks a lot of boxes with this novel. Some of the obvious themes include Lydia being a successful single parent. Alice and Lydia are products of baby boomer parents who are living it up on manmade tropical islands – in other words, the selfishness of baby boomers. George represents the new generation, smarter and more emotionally stable than his mother and/or aunt, despite still being at school.  Land rights with accompanying white person guilt. And an insensitive irresponsible mainstream media.

If there is a legitimate criticism of this book it is that Davis has highlighted too many issues/themes, skims too shallow, but perhaps that is just a reflection of complex modern society, a society driven by hashtags, soundbites, and abbreviated comment.

I did not find this book an easy read and in parts mildly disagreeable. The use of text messaging and social media-style language complete with hash tags was challenging, though I applaud the experimentation and thought the effort to read it was worthwhile. I am glad to have read it. Hovering is well deserving of the awards it has been given.

Reviewed by: Frank Thompson

Ballarat Writers Inc. Book Review Group

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